LOAD ON A GRECIAN URN
“Beauty is truth, truth beauty.” –John Keats
On the john, just the other day,
I was reflecting on what John say….
And, in the end, what I came to find
Became a big load off my mind.
For, sacrilege though it be to say,
John’s words work better the other way:
“Truth is beauty, beauty truth” —
To believe ’tis untrue would be uncouth.
But be wary, if others feign claim
My aim is to put John Keats to shame.
Far be it from me to disparage the master —
His ode, you see, is hardly a disaster.
But if I can improve its beauty, where’s the disgrace?
Would you not do the same, were you in my place?
To muse that I’m above Keats is ode-ious to me —
I am merely his equal, as any Greek geek can see.
magickmermaid 12:46 pm on January 12, 2021 Permalink |
Μπράβο! 🙂
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mistermuse 1:22 pm on January 12, 2021 Permalink |
Mm, I thank u, but by golly g….
Your language is Greek to me. 😉
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Ricardo 3:16 pm on January 12, 2021 Permalink |
Perhaps Keats would have been more contented
If indoor plumbing had been already invented.
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mistermuse 4:54 pm on January 12, 2021 Permalink |
Ricardo, you’re a poet after my own heart….
Instead of my rear, which might cause me to fart.
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obbverse 4:56 pm on January 12, 2021 Permalink |
Finely styled, slyly wordplayed Mr Muse. Indeed words to ponder on. But in light of Johns seeing truth as a shining light…
Keats is butt of mild interest,
I truly strain to be impressed,
In these days of roiling uncivil unrest-
Don’s ugly truths, too tough to digest.
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mistermuse 7:32 pm on January 12, 2021 Permalink |
It IS a big strain, I do agree….
Don’s BS is too much for me.
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Rivergirl 6:01 pm on January 12, 2021 Permalink |
Do you do a lot of reflecting on the John? Or do you just reflect on the doo?
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mistermuse 7:26 pm on January 12, 2021 Permalink |
I should have said IN (not “On”) the john, though it ‘can’ mean the same as loo.
The dis-stink-ion is, I don’t reflect doing number one, only during number two.
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Rivergirl 7:50 pm on January 12, 2021 Permalink
There’s no topping that. I bow to the master… of the throne.
😉
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obbverse 7:52 pm on January 12, 2021 Permalink |
I’m oft constrained to linger there,
But to swiftly rise with a dismissive air.
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calmkate 9:08 pm on January 12, 2021 Permalink |
lol I have no doubt you are his equal, and more!
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mistermuse 9:24 pm on January 12, 2021 Permalink |
A sequel to being Keats’ equal, I waive….
I don’t want him turning over in his grave.
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calmkate 11:47 pm on January 12, 2021 Permalink
from there he can do no harm
claim the crown with calm!
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mistermuse 12:27 am on January 13, 2021 Permalink
As it happens, I take Calm every day (it’s a magnesium supplement in powder form, so you could also say I ‘take a powder’ every day).
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annieasksyou 1:00 am on January 13, 2021 Permalink |
I trust Truth’s beauty’s on your mind
As we prepare to leave Trump behind
But your skat-a-logical verse, I offer,
Seems less like Keats and more like Chaucer…
and that ain’t bad!
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mistermuse 1:49 am on January 13, 2021 Permalink |
As a lover of light verse, it struck me in a flash:
Your quite right verse seems more like Ogden Nash.
Just one more thought before I “skat”:
To your heads-up, I tip my hat!
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rawgod 2:29 am on January 13, 2021 Permalink |
Though I be a poet myself, I will not add to this farce. Instead I am going to be an arese-
hole. The Greek in yoru last line was terribly jarring. I hope you did not put it on your specimen wall.
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mistermuse 11:04 am on January 13, 2021 Permalink |
I was anticipating that you would end with a “jarring” rhyme,
But I suppose that would’ve required you to work overtime.
Nonetheless I must confess that I like your reply….
Though the hope you express is between my wall and I.
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rawgod 2:50 pm on January 13, 2021 Permalink
Jarring would be easy to rhyme, there are many. But the picture of shitting into a jar of formaldehyde, that was priceless.
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masercot 10:46 am on January 13, 2021 Permalink |
I had a similar conversation with a traveler from an antique land.
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mistermuse 12:37 pm on January 13, 2021 Permalink |
I won’t ask what language you conversed in, because I haven’t urned that privilege. 😉
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Ana Daksina 11:42 pm on January 20, 2021 Permalink |
Gosh — I really did have some erudite advice from a fellow (well, using the term generically) poet, but then I read that you already ARE taking a powder.
So I don’ know what to say now. Not that that’ll stop me from saying it, of course, that much is understood! 🤣
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mistermuse 1:34 am on January 21, 2021 Permalink |
This post seems like ancient history now that we’re finally in a post-Trump world, so I will say no more.
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