NOT RIGHT

This poem is perfect….
OK, maybe not quite.
I concede that something
Seems to need a rewrite.

I ponder and ponder….
And then I see the light:
It’s not the poem, but
The title that’s NOT RIGHT.

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12 comments on “NOT RIGHT

  1. mistermuse says:

    Me or the poem? 🙂

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  2. You + poem = both cute!

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  3. Joseph Nebus says:

    Nicely composed, yeah.

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  4. Don Frankel says:

    Perfect.

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  5. arekhill1 says:

    Writing a poem like that is Not Easy.

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  6. mistermuse says:

    The word “Easy” always reminds me of the great Spanish ventriloquist Senor Wences’ “Easy for you, deefeecult for me” routine on the old Ed Sullivan Show. Wences lived to age 103. I have a feeling that will prove deefeecult for me.

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