CIRCUMSTANTIAL EVIDENCE

You can see them
In once-upon-a-time spaces.

You can hear them
Regretting choices.

You can see them
In well-worn faces.

You can hear them
Remembering rejoices.

You can see them
In leftover traces.

You can hear them
Reflecting where time’s voice is.

Circumstances alter places.
Circumstances alter voices.

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6 comments on “CIRCUMSTANTIAL EVIDENCE

  1. arekhill1 says:

    Nicely said, Sr. Muse.

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  2. mistermuse says:

    Thanks, Ricardo.This is one of those poems I spent more time on than I should, never did get it as right as I wanted, and finally said to hell with it and clicked PUBLISH. Under the circumstances, I’ll take your comment as evidence I didn’t completely waste my time.

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  3. mistermuse says:

    Thanks for your testimony, Michaeline, but I think I’ll get back to funny business next time, as this poem gave me a “serious” case of the doubts!

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  4. Don Frankel says:

    Bleep happens. Then we try to make sense of it. Nice one Muse.

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  5. mistermuse says:

    So I moved on to the next post, made funny, and got screwed anyway. Bleep!

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